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Cygnus and Summer Wine by =CaronCecilia:iconCaronCecilia:



My soul is drowning all around me.
Grab my hand.
Pull me up.
I am in the depths of my own prison.


Wilder was outshone while
you littered loose-leaf scraps
with Ozark trash.

Worth nothing but
one sea-green penny, you
wished and bet it all on
black.

A cobbled granite well
became my life.

I sleep in hell, only darkness within.
Yet, if you would only smile,
A thousand stars would light my path,
The way out exposed, clear in my mind.


But, you never fancied constellations, and
first falls from this roller-coaster are
everlasting. I'm
tip-toeing on China now

I doubt you'd even care to know
Earth's molten metals are
jealous of you.

Wrap me inside you,
I want to feel your heart sigh.
Your soul is where I take solace,
Love as brilliant as the sun.

Burn me.
Blind my eyes.
Sear the very flesh from my bones.
I melt into your essence.


Does deafness dine on living lobes
when no thing makes a sound? Silent
shrill cyclones play fortissimo on
my ears' two tender toms.

The wall's whisper sighs for
Chardonnay. My veins only offer
Merlot.

And so, I close my eyes.

I call your name, but to no avail,
Your skin cold like marble.
Lost forever like last year’s winter,
Lost forever to love’s chance.
©2009 =CaronCecilia
:iconcaroncecilia:

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i had so much fun writing this with =Osiristhrasher06! his can be found HERE. be sure and visit his and comment!!!

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:iconvindicta38:
You both did brilliantly! =)

I especially love the line:

Worth nothing but
one sea-green penny, you
wished and bet it all on
black.


:glomp:

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:iconcaroncecilia:
yeah....i agree...i liked that too

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:iconosiristhrasher06:
Thank you so much! :D

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:iconwombat-pentagram:
this is a brilliant piece well done both of you :)

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"to dream perchance to wake anew"...
:iconvertigoart:
Very nice job, by the both of you. It came together very nicely.

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:iconcaroncecilia:
thank you love!! :aww:

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~Those talked over oft times make the best writers.
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yeah, I'm one of those "I really like this, good job!" critics. So sue me...
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I support: =DailyLitDeviations *100ThemesChallenge ~Prompt-A-Day ~CollabLit
:iconcaroncecilia:
thank you!! :aww:

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~Those talked over oft times make the best writers.
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yeah, I'm one of those "I really like this, good job!" critics. So sue me...
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I support: =DailyLitDeviations *100ThemesChallenge ~Prompt-A-Day ~CollabLit
:iconvertigoart:
of course.

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:iconeloquent-weapon:
Both of you did such a brilliant job! :)

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